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Improve help page language around sending targeted requests #1816

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Send targeted requests is better than "Don't carpet bomb" for two reasons: (1) it is more accessible language and (2) it is likely to evoke images of violence.

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Send targeted requests is better than "Don't carpet bomb" for two reasons: (1) it is more accessible language and (2) it is likely to evoke images of violence.
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<strong>Don’t carpet-bomb:</strong>
<strong>Send targetted requests:</strong>
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typo:

- targetted
+ targeted

+1 on changing this; I've pointed to it a few times recently and grimaced a little when reading.

I wonder if this is a bit close to "Word your question carefully" and "Fine-tune your request".

This point is specifically trying to avoid bulk requesting in a way that's disruptive – the word scattergun comes to mind, but annoyingly similar connotations. Might be a nice alternative to indiscriminate? If we can't think of anything else then happy with "Send targeted requests".

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thank you

@confirmordeny confirmordeny merged commit 1871113 into mysociety:master Jan 5, 2024
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@garethrees garethrees changed the title Send targeted request Improve help page language around sending targeted requests Apr 3, 2024
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