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chore: optimize compute_smooth_weight #4390

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New implmenetation is obviously more efficient.

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  • New Features

    • Enhanced the compute_smooth_weight functionality for improved efficiency and clarity by simplifying the distance handling logic.
    • Introduced configuration for the array_api_strict module to ensure compatibility with the latest API version.
  • Bug Fixes

    • Removed unnecessary masking conditions, ensuring smoother calculations within defined distance ranges.

New implmenetation is obviously more efficient.

Signed-off-by: Jinzhe Zeng <[email protected]>

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The pull request introduces modifications to the compute_smooth_weight function in two files: deepmd/dpmodel/utils/env_mat.py and deepmd/pt/utils/preprocess.py. The changes involve replacing the previous masking logic for handling distance values with a clipping operation that confines the distances to a specified range defined by rmin and rmax. The calculation of the smooth weight is streamlined by directly using the clipped distances, simplifying the control flow and enhancing the function's clarity and efficiency.

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File Change Summary
deepmd/dpmodel/utils/env_mat.py Modified compute_smooth_weight to replace masking logic with clipping operation using xp.clip. Updated calculation of vv using uu2 (square of uu). Simplified return statement to directly return vv.
deepmd/pt/utils/preprocess.py Updated compute_smooth_weight to clamp distance values within rmin and rmax, removing masking logic. Adjusted calculation of vv to use uu2. Simplified return statement to return only vv.
source/tests/array_api_strict/init.py Added import and set array API strict flags to version "2023.12" for testing environment configuration.

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    participant User
    participant Function as compute_smooth_weight
    participant Clipping as xp.clip

    User->>Function: Call compute_smooth_weight(distance, rmin, rmax)
    Function->>Clipping: Clip distance to [rmin, rmax]
    Clipping-->>Function: Clipped distance
    Function->>Function: Calculate uu and uu2
    Function->>Function: Calculate vv using uu2
    Function-->>User: Return vv
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🧹 Outside diff range and nitpick comments (2)
deepmd/pt/utils/preprocess.py (1)

15-17: LGTM! Clear polynomial calculation with good variable naming

The introduction of uu2 improves readability by avoiding repeated multiplication. The polynomial calculation is clear and well-structured.

Consider using torch.pow for slightly better performance:

-    uu2 = uu * uu
+    uu2 = torch.pow(uu, 2)

This could potentially leverage hardware-specific optimizations in PyTorch's implementation.

deepmd/dpmodel/utils/env_mat.py (1)

30-32: Consider Horner's method for polynomial evaluation

The polynomial calculation can be further optimized using Horner's method:

-    uu2 = uu * uu
-    vv = uu2 * uu * (-6.0 * uu2 + 15.0 * uu - 10.0) + 1.0
+    # Horner's method: -6x^5 + 15x^4 - 10x^3 + 1
+    vv = 1.0 + uu * (-10.0 + uu * (15.0 + uu * -6.0)) * uu * uu

This form:

  • Reduces the number of multiplications
  • Often results in better numerical stability
  • Is the standard method for efficient polynomial evaluation
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deepmd/pt/utils/preprocess.py (1)

13-13: LGTM! Efficient use of torch.clamp

The switch from masking to clipping is a good optimization that reduces branching and memory usage while maintaining the same mathematical behavior.

Let's verify the behavior at edge cases:

✅ Verification successful

The initial search found only one test, but we need to:

  1. See the actual implementation of compute_smooth_weight
  2. Check if there are more detailed test cases that verify edge cases
  3. Understand how the function is tested across different scenarios

This will help us determine if the edge cases are properly covered in the tests.


The current test only checks basic functionality with a simple range of numbers (0-9), but we need to:

  1. See the actual implementation to understand what edge cases should be tested
  2. Look for any numerical validation tests that might cover edge cases indirectly
    This will help us determine if the clamp operation needs additional test coverage.

Edge cases are properly handled, implementation is safe

The implementation includes proper safeguards and edge case handling:

  • Input validation: Raises ValueError if rmin >= rmax
  • Proper clamping: Values outside [rmin, rmax] are safely clamped
  • Consistent behavior: Both PyTorch and NumPy implementations use identical logic

The existing test, while basic, is sufficient because:

  1. The mathematical formula is simple and continuous
  2. Clamping operation is a well-tested PyTorch primitive
  3. Edge cases are handled by input validation and clamping
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deepmd/dpmodel/utils/env_mat.py (2)

28-28: Excellent optimization using clip!

Replacing the masking logic with xp.clip is a great optimization that:

  • Reduces branching for better CPU pipeline utilization
  • Enables better vectorization
  • Simplifies the memory access pattern

28-32: Verify numerical consistency across array backends

Since this is a performance-critical function used in molecular dynamics calculations, we should verify the numerical consistency of the clipping optimization across different array backends (NumPy, JAX, PyTorch).

✅ Verification successful

Let me search for the actual implementation and usage to understand the context better.


Based on the code inspection, I can now provide a final response:

Numerical consistency is maintained across array backends

The implementation correctly uses array_api_compat to ensure consistent behavior across different array backends (NumPy, JAX, PyTorch):

  • The function dynamically gets the array namespace using array_api_compat.array_namespace(distance)
  • The clipping operation uses the backend's native clip function via xp.clip()
  • All arithmetic operations are performed using the array backend's operators
  • The smooth weight calculation maintains the same mathematical formula across all backends
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28-32: Excellent optimization of the smooth weight computation!

The changes improve the function in several ways:

  1. Using clip instead of masks reduces branching, making the code more efficient
  2. Introducing uu2 avoids redundant computation of the squared term
  3. The implementation is more concise and easier to understand while maintaining mathematical equivalence

Let's verify the mathematical equivalence with the previous implementation:

✅ Verification successful

Optimization verified and consistent across implementations

The changes are mathematically equivalent and well-aligned with other implementations:

  • The PyTorch implementation in deepmd/pt/utils/preprocess.py uses the exact same polynomial formula and clipping approach
  • Both implementations maintain identical boundary behavior and mathematical operations
  • The test in test_env_mat.py verifies the basic functionality, though it could be more comprehensive

The optimization is safe and improves the code without changing its behavior.

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28-32: Consider numerical stability implications

While the optimization is good, please ensure that:

  1. The clipping operation maintains the required numerical precision for scientific calculations
  2. There are no edge cases where the new implementation might produce different results from the original
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Based on the gathered evidence, I can now provide a final response:

The numerical implementation is verified and safe

The clipping operation and polynomial smoothing function in the environment matrix computation have been thoroughly validated:

  • The implementation is tested against reference results with strict numerical equality checks (assert_allclose)
  • Both PyTorch and array API implementations maintain consistent results across different precision modes
  • The smoothing function uses a well-conditioned 5th-order polynomial that's numerically stable within the clipped range
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source/tests/array_api_strict/__init__.py (1)

6-8: Consider documenting version compatibility requirements

The comments explain the version change, but it would be helpful to document any specific compatibility requirements or breaking changes introduced by this version update.

Consider adding a comment like:

 # this is the default version in the latest array_api_strict,
 # but in old versions it may be 2022.12
+# Note: Version 2023.12 requires <specific requirements> and introduces <specific changes>
 array_api_strict.set_array_api_strict_flags(api_version="2023.12")
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4-4: LGTM: Clean import statement

The import is appropriately placed and follows Python conventions.

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