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data/json/monsters/fungus_zombie.json

@@ -357,7 +357,7 @@
     "id": "mon_zombie_runner_fungal",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "fungal runner" },
-    "description": "Fungal sprouts seem to support the host's broken legs like crude splints.  even with it's eyes shrouded with tiny spores, it darts towards anything that seems to move in a small radius.",
+    "description": "Fungal sprouts seem to support the host's broken legs like crude splints.  Even with its eyes shrouded with tiny spores, it darts towards anything that seems to move in a small radius.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "human",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -431,8 +431,8 @@
   {
     "id": "mon_zombie_tough_fungal",
     "type": "MONSTER",
-    "name": { "str": "fungal bulk." },
-    "description": "This terrifying fungal construct seems to have lost all facial features, it's face covered in thick fungal sprouts.  It's arms end in jagged points as fungal tendrils burst forth.",
+    "name": { "str": "fungal bulk" },
+    "description": "This terrifying fungal construct seems to have lost all facial features, its face covered in thick fungal sprouts.  Its arms end in jagged points as fungal tendrils burst forth.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "human",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -466,7 +466,7 @@
     "id": "mon_zombie_crawler_fungal",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "crawling fungus" },
-    "description": "This fungal monster struggles to move as bulbous mushrooms grow from it's exposed back.  Its leg's seem to be wrapped in sturdy tendrils, and it's arms visibly swell and pop gruesomely with each drag along the ground.",
+    "description": "This fungal monster struggles to move as bulbous mushrooms grow from its exposed back.  Its leg seems to be wrapped in sturdy tendrils, and its arms visibly swell and pop gruesomely with each drag along the ground.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "human",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -549,7 +549,7 @@
     "id": "mon_beekeeper_fungal",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "scarred fungus" },
-    "description": "Patches of fungal growths emerge from the soft, unscarred skin of the host, as visible dent's are made into the tough callouses and scar tissue, attempting to break through.",
+    "description": "Patches of fungal growths emerge from the soft, unscarred skin of the host, as visible dents are made into the tough callouses and scar tissue, attempting to break through.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "human",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -586,7 +586,7 @@
     "id": "mon_zombie_dog_fungus",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "fungal dog" },
-    "description": "The deformed, animated, and again reanimated corpse of a what looked like the concept of a canine.  It's lost almost all of it's dog-like features, except for it's constant aggressive growling, and tendency to bite. It shakes it's fur like a wet dog, sending tiny spore clouds everywhere.",
+    "description": "The deformed, animated, and again reanimated corpse of a what looked like the concept of a canine.  It's lost almost all of it's dog-like features, except for its constant aggressive growling, and tendency to bite. It shakes its fur like a wet dog, sending tiny spore clouds everywhere.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "dog",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@
     "id": "mon_zoose_fungus",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "antlered fungal horror" },
-    "description": "This formerly-majestic beast has lost any semblance of what a moose is, aside from it's outgrown antlers, now covered in writhing fungal tendrils, seemingly trying to break into the cracking bone.  The animated corpse seems in a state of constant disrepair, held together by strange, sticky blue orbs.",
+    "description": "This formerly-majestic beast has lost any semblance of what a moose is, aside from its outgrown antlers, now covered in writhing fungal tendrils, seemingly trying to break into the cracking bone.  The animated corpse seems in a state of constant disrepair, held together by strange, sticky blue orbs.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "horse",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@
     "id": "mon_zougar_fungus",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "fungal pouncer" },
-    "description": "This four legged, oversized cat seems to spew spores from it's pawpads with each clusmy landing, as if constantly gaining and losing balance in air.",
+    "description": "This four legged, oversized cat seems to spew spores from its pawpads with each clusmy landing, as if constantly gaining and losing balance in air.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "dog",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -701,7 +701,7 @@
     "id": "mon_zombie_horse_fungus",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": " rotten fungal horse" },
-    "description": "This hulking horse-figure seems to re-learn galloping with every step, as large fungi cling and sprout off of it's mane.  It travels towards anything moving, even though in the center of each eye lies multiple fungi blooms.",
+    "description": "This hulking horse-figure seems to re-learn galloping with every step, as large fungi cling and sprout off of its mane.  It travels towards anything moving, even though in the center of each eye lies multiple fungi blooms.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "horse",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -735,7 +735,7 @@
     "id": "mon_ziger_fungus",
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "tiger fungal wight" },
-    "description": "This rotting tiger has lost it's stumble,as large fungi bulbs seem to have extended it's pawpads throughly.  It's head crackles when trying to turn, seemingly stuck facing forward.",
+    "description": "This rotting tiger has lost its stumble, as large fungi bulbs seem to have extended its pawpads thoroughly.  Its head crackles when trying to turn, seemingly stuck facing forward.",
     "copy-from": "mon_zougar_fungus",
     "volume": "150 L",
     "weight": "190 kg",
@@ -754,7 +754,7 @@
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "fungal wight" },
     "looks_like": "mon_deer",
-    "description": "This deer's thick fur is spotted with blue orbs that seem to pop and ooze every few minutes, and it's rotten skin seem's unable to fall off, held together by thick fungal bedding underneath.",
+    "description": "This deer's thick fur is spotted with blue orbs that seem to pop and ooze every few minutes, and its rotten skin seems unable to fall off, held together by thick fungal bedding underneath.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "horse",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],
@@ -786,7 +786,7 @@
     "type": "MONSTER",
     "name": { "str": "fungideer" },
     "looks_like": "mon_zeer",
-    "description": "This bumpy, discolored reindeer resembles a malformed rudolph, it's nose having a faintly glowing red fungi sprout.  It'd look almost comical if it wasn't mutilating bodies with it's innate strength.",
+    "description": "This bumpy, discolored reindeer resembles a malformed Rudolph, its nose having a faintly glowing red fungi sprout.  It'd look almost comical if it wasn't mutilating bodies with its innate strength.",
     "default_faction": "fungus",
     "bodytype": "horse",
     "species": [ "FUNGUS" ],