Merge pull request #492 from w3c/nav-as-list

Update the navigation section

a11y-meta-display-guide/2.0/draft/guidelines/index.html

@@ -814,17 +814,15 @@ <h3 data-localization-id="navigation-title">Navigation</h3>
 				<div class="note">
 					<p>This key information can be hidden if metadata is missing. Alternatively it can be stated that
 							<span data-localization-id="navigation-no-metadata" data-localization-mode="descriptive">No
-							information about navigation is available.</span>
-					</p>
+							information about navigation is available</span>.</p>
 				</div>
 
 				<p>Identifies the navigation features included in the publication.</p>
 
-				<p>Offering different ways to navigate digital publications (table of contents, by headings, index,
-					etc.) is important to allow the user to easily access each part of the content. These features are
-					both essential for accessibility and very important for all users reading publications. Therefore,
+				<p>   Navigating a digital publication    through a table of contents, an index, by headings,  or by go to page shortcuts is important to allow the user to easily access each part of the digital publication. These features are
+					both essential for accessibility and  important for all users reading publications. Therefore,
 					clearly communicating to the user what navigation features are available in the publication is
-					important to enable proper selection.</p>
+					important to enable proper title selection.</p>
 
 				<p>Note that the Web Content Accessibility Guidelines (WCAG) 2.1 standard requires that <q>more than one
 						way is available to locate a Web page within a set of Web pages</q> (<cite><a
@@ -838,32 +836,31 @@ <h4>Examples</h4>
 						adoption.</p>
 
 					<aside class="example" title="Descriptive explanations">
+<p><span data-localization-id="navigation-intro" data-localization-mode="descriptive">Navigation features contain:</span></p>
 						<ul>
-							<li data-localization-id="navigation-toc" data-localization-mode="descriptive">Contains a
-								table of contents that provides direct access to all chapters of the text via
-								links</li>
+							<li data-localization-id="navigation-toc" data-localization-mode="descriptive">a table of contents  to  all chapters of the text via links</li>
+<li data-localization-id="navigation-index" data-localization-mode="descriptive">An index
+								 to  links to referenced entries</li>
 							<li data-localization-id="navigation-structural" data-localization-mode="descriptive"
-								>Contains book elements such as headings, tables, etc for structured navigation</li>
-							<li data-localization-id="navigation-index" data-localization-mode="descriptive">Index
-								provides links to item references</li>
-
+								>book elements such as headings, tables, etc for structured navigation</li>
 							<li data-localization-id="navigation-page-navigation" data-localization-mode="descriptive">A
-								page list enables users to navigate directly to pages from the identified print source
+								page list    to go to    pages from the  print source
 								version</li>
 						</ul>
 					</aside>
 
 					<aside class="example" title="Compact explanation">
-						<p><span data-localization-id="navigation-intro" data-localization-mode="compact">Navigation
-								by</span>
-							<span data-localization-id="navigation-toc" data-localization-mode="compact">table of
-								contents</span>, <span data-localization-id="navigation-structural"
-								data-localization-mode="compact">headings</span>, <span
-								data-localization-id="navigation-index" data-localization-mode="compact"
-								>index</span><span data-localization-id="join-array-and">, and </span>
-							<span data-localization-id="navigation-page-navigation" data-localization-mode="compact"
-								>supports page navigation</span>
-						</p>
+						<p><span data-localization-id="navigation-intro" data-localization-mode="compact">Navigation by:</span></p>
+<ul>
+							<li><span data-localization-id="navigation-toc" data-localization-mode="compact">table of
+								contents</span></li>
+<li><span							data-localization-id="navigation-index" data-localization-mode="compact"
+								>index</span></li>
+ <li><span data-localization-id="navigation-structural"
+								data-localization-mode="compact">headings</span></li>
+							<li><span data-localization-id="navigation-page-navigation" data-localization-mode="compact"
+								>go to page </span></li>
+						</ul>
 					</aside>
 				</section>