[OSPO Book] Content and Copy edits to PR "Final Review for chapter 4"

[alice-sowerby]

Copy edits to improve readability, and adding content to empty table cells.

Signed-off-by: Alice Sowerby [email protected]

AnaJS: Including the contributors that participated in the content creation of this PR: #500 and which are also included in this PR

These are changes that came from the final review during Chapter 4 meeting. During the call and the next two weeks, the changes were included using this docfor chapter intro and this doc for activity table

Contributors in this PR:

• Alice Sowerby
• Cornelius Schumacher
• Gergely Csatari
• Ana Jiménez
• Ulises Gascon
• Jan van den Berg

These people are also acknowledged in the OSPO Book contributors section.

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[anajsana]

@alice-sowerby Great work Alice! Thank you!

PS: I've included in the description of this PR the details from the now duplicated PR here: #500

[anajsana]

Suggested adding the ✅ Assessment 💡 Recommendations and tags in the TOC to follow the same format that also shows in other chapters + include OSPO mindmap link

[koozz]

Make it visually stand out as a phase. Could be done later in another pull request too. This can be replaced at a later stage with one of the OSPO / TODO Group branded bars.

For example, this one:

[alice-sowerby]

@koozz @anajsana my understanding was that we wouldn't add emojis without an overall design from the designers?

[koozz]

@koozz @anajsana my understanding was that we wouldn't add emojis without an overall design from the designers?

That's OK 👍

[anajsana]

@koozz @anajsana my understanding was that we wouldn't add emojis without an overall design from the designers?

Correct. But this might take time, so I'd suggest merging this and keeping the emoji. and then take care of replacing the emojis for the official icons, once this is ready

[anajsana]

@alice-sowerby besides changing emoji to custom icons open issue: Do you think this PR is ready to be merged? Are there any blockers on my end?

[alice-sowerby]

@anajsana I think it's good to go!