Clarifies aim of document

Also corrects erroneous reference to Data Plane.
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@@ -177,10 +177,10 @@ This document describes the SCION Control Plane component. It should be read in
 
 The SCION architecture was initially developed outside of the IETF by ETH Zurich with significant contributions from Anapaya Systems. It is deployed in the Swiss finance sector to provide resilient connectivity between financial institutions. The aim of this document is to document the existing protocol specification as deployed, and to introduce new concepts that can potentially be further improved to address particular problems with the current Internet architecture.
 
-The SCION architecture was initially developed outside of the IETF by ETH Zurich with significant contributions from Anapaya Systems. It is deployed in the Swiss finance sector to provide resilient connectivity between financial institutions. The aim of this document is to document the existing protocol specification as deployed, and to introduce new concepts that can potentially be further improved to address particular problems with the current Internet architecture.
+The SCION architecture was initially developed outside of the IETF by ETH Zurich with significant contributions from Anapaya Systems. It is deployed in the Swiss finance sector to provide resilient connectivity between financial institutions. The aim of this document is to document the existing protocol specification as deployed, to encourage additional implementations, and to introduce new concepts that can potentially be further improved to address particular problems with the current Internet architecture. This is not intended for publication as an Internet Standard.
 
 Note (to be removed before publication): this document, together with the other components {{I-D.dekater-scion-pki}} and {{I-D.dekater-scion-dataplane}}, deprecates {{I-D.dekater-panrg-scion-overview}}.
-This document provides an extensive description of how the SCION Data Plane is implemented in order to facilitate understanding, but could potentially be split into separate documents if considered suitable for submission to the Internet Standards Process.
+This document provides an extensive description of how the SCION Control Plane is implemented in order to facilitate understanding, but could potentially be split into separate documents if considered suitable for submission to the Internet Standards Process.
 
 ## Terminology {#terms}