DOC-3785 implemented feedback

content/develop/connect/clients/_index.md

@@ -16,8 +16,8 @@ weight: 45
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 Use the Redis client libraries to connect to Redis servers from
-your own code. We currently support and document client libraries
-for 4 main languages:
+your own code. We support and document client libraries
+for four main languages:
 [Python]({{< relref "/develop/connect/clients/python" >}}),
 [C#/.NET]({{< relref "/develop/connect/clients/dotnet" >}}),
 [Node.js]({{< relref "/develop/connect/clients/nodejs" >}}),
@@ -33,10 +33,10 @@ support and documentation on external sites:
 - [Ruby](https://github.com/redis/redis-rb)
 - [C](https://github.com/redis/hiredis)
 
-To use the client libraries, you will need a Redis server to connect to.
+You will need access to a Redis server to use these libraries.
 You can experiment with a local installation of Redis Stack
 (see [Install Redis Stack]({{< relref "/operate/oss_and_stack/install/install-stack/" >}})) or with a free trial of [Redis Cloud]({{< relref "/operate/rc" >}}).
-To interact with a Redis server without writing code, use our
+To interact with a Redis server without writing code, use the
 [Redis CLI]({{< relref "/develop/connect/cli" >}}) and
 [Redis Insight]({{< relref "/develop/connect/insight" >}}) tools.