fix: Apply suggestions from code review

library/time.po

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ msgstr ""
 "Project-Id-Version: Python 3.12\n"
 "Report-Msgid-Bugs-To: \n"
 "POT-Creation-Date: 2024-05-09 00:03+0000\n"
-"PO-Revision-Date: 2024-05-29 22:56+0800\n"
+"PO-Revision-Date: 2024-07-09 08:33+0800\n"
 "Last-Translator: Adrian Liaw <[email protected]>\n"
 "Language-Team: Chinese - TAIWAN (https://github.com/python/python-docs-zh-"
 "tw)\n"
@@ -113,8 +113,8 @@ msgid ""
 "by the units in which their value or argument is expressed. E.g. on most "
 "Unix systems, the clock \"ticks\" only 50 or 100 times a second."
 msgstr ""
-"各種即時函式的精確度可能低於其值或引數所表示的單位所建議的精確度。例如，在大"
-"多數 Unix 系統上，時鐘每秒只「跳」50 次或 100 次。"
+"各種即時 (real-time) 函式的精確度可能低於其值或引數所表示的單位所建議的精確"
+"度。例如，在大多數 Unix 系統上，時鐘每秒只「跳」50 次或 100 次。"
 
 #: ../../library/time.rst:71
 msgid ""
@@ -259,7 +259,9 @@ msgstr ""
 msgid ""
 "Passing an invalid or expired *thread_id* may result in undefined behavior, "
 "such as segmentation fault."
-msgstr "傳遞無效或過期的 *thread_id* 可能會導致未定義的行為，例如分段錯誤。"
+msgstr ""
+"傳遞無效或過期的 *thread_id* 可能會導致未定義的行為，例如分段錯誤 "
+"(segmentation fault)。"
 
 #: ../../library/time.rst:149
 msgid ":ref:`Availability <availability>`: Unix"