Merge pull request #19 from jmhbnz/main

Begin refining setup instructions and fix improve scenario 1.

README.org

@@ -10,16 +10,16 @@ Below are the instructions for manually setting up an environment to run the hac
 
 ** Cloud cluster
 
-Each team will require an AWS ROSA cluster, which we will provision via the [[https://demo.redhat.com/catalog?item=babylon-catalog-prod/sandboxes-gpte.rosa.prod&utm_source=webapp&utm_medium=share-link][Red Hat Demo System]]. When requesting the environments we enable the workshop user interface.
+Each team participating in the hackathon will require a [[https://aws.amazon.com/rosa][Red Hat OpenShift on AWS (ROSA)]] cluster, which we will provision via the [[https://demo.redhat.com/catalog?item=babylon-catalog-prod/sandboxes-gpte.rosa.prod&utm_source=webapp&utm_medium=share-link][Red Hat Demo System]]. When requesting the environments we enable the workshop user interface.
 
 ** On-premises cluster
 
-Each team will require a Single Node OpenShift cluster, representing their teams on premises environment which we will provision via the [[https://demo.redhat.com/catalog?item=babylon-catalog-prod/openshift-cnv.ocpmulti-single-node-cnv.prod&utm_source=webapp&utm_medium=share-link][Red Hat Demo System]]. When requesting the environments we enable the workshop user interface.
+Each team will also require a Single Node OpenShift cluster, representing their teams on premises environment which we will provision via the [[https://demo.redhat.com/catalog?item=babylon-catalog-prod/openshift-cnv.ocpmulti-single-node-cnv.prod&utm_source=webapp&utm_medium=share-link][Red Hat Demo System]]. When requesting the environments we enable the workshop user interface.
 
 
 * Cluster setup - on-premises
 
-For each cluster provisioned for the hackathon, the following steps need to be performed:
+For each on-premises cluster provisioned for the hackathon, the following steps need to be performed:
 
 
 ** Log in to cluster
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ oc new-project minio
 
 oc apply -f setup/minio-setup.yaml
 
-oc rollout status minio --watch
+oc rollout status deployment/minio --watch
 #+end_src
 
 ** TODO Consider creating a cluster web terminal pod

data/hackathon/scenario1.mdx

@@ -23,22 +23,20 @@ You're in a race to reach the highest score before the session concludes! If mul
 | *Acme Financial Services*                                                     |
 </Zoom>
 
-Acme Financial Services is a large bank based in Australia. They have been tinkering with deploying AI models and are now ready to put a proper AI platform in place and operationalise their AI model deployment. 
+ACME Financial Services is a large bank based in Australia. Their data science team have been tinkering with AI models on their laptops and are now ready to put a proper AI platform in place and properly operationalise some models. 
 
-One of the potential options for Acme Financial Services is to adopt Red Hat OpenShift AI as an ML OPs platform. 
+The bank is currently going through a "bake off" evaluating multiple options for an AI platform. One of the potential options for ACME Financial Services is to adopt Red Hat OpenShift AI as an ML OPs platform. The bank already has OpenShift on-premises and has been exploring a ROSA cloud deployment as well.
 
-Your hackathon team are the pre-sales technical team engaging with Acme technical teams to secure buy-in for a large scale production deployment to proceed.
+Your hackathon team are the pre-sales technical team engaging with various ACME teams and leadership to try and win the bake off, securing buy-in for a large scale OpenShift AI deployment to proceed.
 
 
 ## 1.1 - Understanding the environment
 
-For this challenge you'll be given two OpenShift clusters
+For this challenge your team will be given two OpenShift clusters
 - an AWS ROSA OpenShift 4 cluster representing the ACME cloud environment 
-- a Single Node OpenShift cluster representing the ACME On Premises environment
+- a Single Node OpenShift cluster representing the ACME on-premises environment
 
-All challenge tasks must be performed on these clusters so your solutions can be graded successfully.
-Some challenges will require the use of specific clusters
-You can and are encouraged to use any supporting documentation or other resources in order to tackle each of the challenge tasks.
+All challenge tasks must be performed on these clusters so your solutions can be graded successfully.  Some challenges will require the use of specific clusters. You can and are encouraged to use any supporting documentation or other resources in order to tackle each of the challenge tasks.
 
 <Zoom>
 |![cluster](/hackathon/static/images/hackathon/cluster.png)                     |
@@ -51,9 +49,11 @@ You can and are encouraged to use any supporting documentation or other resource
 
 Working in a small team you will have two shared clusters for team members to use. Your team will have a name allocated already.
 
-To get underway open your web browser and navigate to this link to allocate an environment for your team https://demo.redhat.com/workshop/s72ya3.
+To get underway open your web browser and navigate to these link to allocate two clusters for your team:
+1. ROSA https://demo.redhat.com/workshop/s72ya3
+2. On-premises https://demo.redhat.com/workshop/s72ya3
 
-Register for an environment using `[team name]@redhat.com` and the password provided by your hackathon organisers. Registering with a team email will mean all your team members will be able to see the same cluster details for your shared team clusters.
+Register for each cluster using `[team name]@redhat.com` and the password provided by your hackathon organisers. Registering with a team email will mean all your team members will be able to login and see the same cluster details for your shared team clusters.
 
 <Zoom>
 |![cluster](/hackathon/static/images/hackathon/workshop.png)                    |
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ The event team will reply in slack to confirm your team has been recorded and st
 
 ## 1.5 - Hints!
 
-If you get stuck on a question, fear not, perhaps try a different approach. If you have tried everything you can think of and are still stuck you can unlock a hint for `3` points by posting a message in the `#event-anz-ocp-virt-hackathon` channel with the message:
+If you get stuck on a question, fear not, perhaps try a different approach. If you have tried everything you can think of and are still stuck you can unlock a hint for `5` points by posting a message in the `#event-anz-ocp-ai-hackathon` channel with the message:
 
 > [team name] are stuck on [exercise] and are unlocking a hint.