Update mdn_plus_privacy.md (#1947)

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Update for Firefox > Mozilla Account change + minor changes in last paragraph to align with other recently updated Notices.

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Addressing issues noted in review

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Co-authored-by: Francesco Lodolo <[email protected]>

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Co-authored-by: Peiying <[email protected]>
Co-authored-by: Francesco Lodolo <[email protected]>

en/mdn_plus_privacy.md

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 ## <span class="privacy-header-firefox">MDN Plus</span> <span class="privacy-header-policy">Privacy Notice</span>
 
-Version 1.1, Effective May 24, 2023
-{: datetime="2023-05-24" }
+Version 1.2, Effective November 1, 2023
+{: datetime="2023-11-01" }
 
 ## At Mozilla, we design products with your privacy in mind.
 
@@ -13,15 +13,15 @@ This privacy notice explains what data MDN Plus collects, shares, and why. We al
 
 ### Information we collect {: #InfoWeCollect }
 
-__Firefox Account information.__ This service requires a Firefox Account, which provides MDN Plus read-only access to your Firefox Account profile information, for example your user ID, display name, avatar, email address, locale, and active product subscriptions. Learn more about [Firefox Account data practices](https://www.mozilla.org/privacy/firefox/#firefox-accounts-join-firefox).
+__Mozilla account information.__ This service requires a Mozilla account, which provides MDN Plus read-only access to your Mozilla account profile information, for example your user ID, display name, avatar, email address, locale, and active product subscriptions. Learn more about [Mozilla account data practices](https://www.mozilla.org/privacy/firefox/#firefox-accounts-join-firefox).
 
-__MDN Plus Account Information.__ When you use MDN Plus features, we receive the data required to provide those features to you. For instance, if you set saved pages, we receive your saved pages.
+__MDN Plus account information.__ When you use MDN Plus features, we receive the data required to provide those features to you. For instance, if you set saved pages, we receive your saved pages.
 
 __Location information.__ MDN Plus receives your IP address when you sign up for and use the service. We use the IP address in order to approximate your location because MDN Plus is currently only available in certain countries.
 
 __Payment information.__ When you subscribe to MDN Plus, you will send payment through one of our third-party payment providers: Stripe, Apple, PayPal, or Google Pay. Mozilla receives a record of your account (including your billing address and the last four digits of your payment method) and the status of your account’s subscription. Mozilla does not store your full payment details.
 
-__Interaction data.__ Mozilla receives data about your interactions with MDN Plus, including when you log in and when you make changes to your Firefox Account like changing your email address or product subscriptions.
+__Interaction data.__ Mozilla receives data about your interactions with MDN Plus, including when you log in and when you make changes to your Mozilla account like changing your email address or product subscriptions.
 
 __Technical data.__ Mozilla receives basic information from MDN Plus about the web browser you’re using and the operating system it’s running on. When MDN Plus connects to our servers to authenticate and update your MDN Plus account, your IP address is temporarily collected as part of our server logs. 
 
@@ -31,10 +31,10 @@ MDN Plus doesn’t share any of your data with third parties.
 
 ### Data privacy questions? {: #markup }
 
-Much of the information that we store about our Firefox Account users is easily accessible by logging into your account. You can learn more about  managing your data [here](https://support.mozilla.org/products/privacy-and-security/user-control). To make requests, please contact us through our [Data Subject Access Request Portal](https://privacyportal.onetrust.com/webform/1350748f-7139-405c-8188-22740b3b5587/4ba08202-2ede-4934-a89e-f0b0870f95f0).
+Much of the information that we store about our Mozilla account users is easily accessible by [signing in to your account](https://accounts.firefox.com/signin), where you can also update your data sharing settings. To make requests regarding your personal data, please contact us through our [Data Subject Access Request Portal](https://privacyportal.onetrust.com/webform/1350748f-7139-405c-8188-22740b3b5587/4ba08202-2ede-4934-a89e-f0b0870f95f0).
 
 If you have any other questions regarding our privacy practices, please contact us at [email protected].
 
-We respond to all requests we receive from individuals wishing to exercise their data protection rights in accordance with applicable data protection laws.
+We respond to all requests we receive from individuals wishing to exercise their data protection rights regardless of where the individual lives. We will honor your request unless a legal requirement prevents us from doing so or a legal exception applies.
 
 Please visit our [forums](https://support.mozilla.org/) for general MDN Plus related support help.