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docs/sql_reference/commands/queries/cancel.md

@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@ parent: Queries
 
 # CANCEL QUERY
 
-The `CANCEL QUERY` statement is used to cancel a running query within the Firebolt engine. This statement provides a mechanism to terminate the execution of a specific query identified by its unique query_id.
+The `CANCEL QUERY` statement is used to cancel a running query within the Firebolt engine. This statement provides a mechanism to terminate the execution of a specific query identified by its unique `query_id`.
 
 ## Syntax
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ CANCEL QUERY WHERE query_id = '12345';
 
 ## Example Use Case
 
-Suppose there is a long-running query that needs to be canceled to free up system resources. The following statement can be used to obtain the query_id:
+Consider a scenario where there is a long-running query that needs to be canceled to free up system resources. The following statement can be used to obtain the query_id:
 ```sql
 select status, duration_usec, query_text, query_id from information_schema.running_queries;
 ```
@@ -44,13 +44,11 @@ Suppose the long-running query is identified with query_id '12345':
 ```sql
 CANCEL QUERY WHERE query_id = '12345';
 ```
-This will initiate the cancellation process for the specified query_id. While the query is not completely terminated, its status in `information_schema.running_queries` can be observed as `CANCELING`.
-Once the query is canceled, it disappears from running_queries. Its status in `information_schema.query_history`:
+This will initiate the cancellation process for the specified query_id. While the query is not immediately removed from running_queries, its status will be observed as `CANCELING` there.
+After the cancellation process is completed, the query will have the `CANCELED` status in the `information_schema.query_history` view:
 ```sql
 select query_id, status from information_schema.query_history;
 ```
-will be observed as `CANCELED`.
-
 
 ## Caution