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writing-visualising/dashboards_rshiny.qmd

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 You need to alert the [explore education statistics platforms team](mailto:[email protected]) of any new dashboard publication **as early in development as possible** and keep us updated on the expected publication date so that we can review the dashboard against DfE standards and set up and support on the deployment to ShinyApps.io.
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-All dashboard publications and major updates need authorisation from the relevant G6 or DD and the [statistics development team](mailto:[email protected]) (with the former authorisation e-mail being forwarded on to the [explore education statistics platforms team](mailto:[email protected])).
+If you are publishing a new dashboard, or adding major updates to an existing one, you must:
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+- Obtain authorisation via email from the relevant G6 or DD and the [statistics development team](mailto:[email protected]) \
+- Forward authorisation emails to the [explore education statistics platforms team](mailto:[email protected])
 
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 ## Updating existing dashboards