clean up bpmn landing page

docs/components/best-practices/modeling/creating-readable-process-models.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ tags:
 description: "Create visual process models to better understand, discuss, and remember processes so models are easy to read and understand."
 ---
 
-We create visual process models to better understand, discuss, and remember processes. Hence, it is crucial that models are easy to read and understand. The single most important thing is to to use well-chosen labels.
+We create visual process models to better understand, discuss, and remember processes. Hence, it is crucial that models are easy to read and understand. The single most important thing is to use well-chosen labels.
 
 ## Essential practices
 

docs/components/modeler/bpmn/bpmn.md

@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@ title: BPMN in Modeler
 description: Let's start modeling by creating a BPMN diagram.
 ---
 
+**Business Process Model and Notation (BPMN)** was developed as a graphical notation to represent complex processes. It is maintained by the non-profit [The Object Management Group (OMG)](https://www.omg.org/spec/BPMN/) and employed by numerous organizations globally. The visual nature of BPMN enables greater collaboration between different teams, particularly within Modeler.
+
 :::note
 BPMN diagrams must be created for the process engine they intend to be deployed on. You cannot run a BPMN diagram modeled for Camunda 7 in Camunda 8, or vice versa, at this time.
 :::
@@ -17,15 +19,15 @@ Web and Desktop Modeler both offer a similar core BPMN 2.0 Modeling experience:
 - Add BPMN elements from the palette on the left side of the page by dragging and dropping them onto the diagram canvas.
 - Change the type of element in place by clicking on an element to reveal the context menu. Then, click the wrench icon to change the type of element to a [service task](./service-tasks/service-tasks.md) or [user task](./user-tasks/user-tasks.md), for example.
 
-## Demo
+## Creating BPMN elements
 
-![Demo](./assets/demo.gif)
+Using BPMN in Modeler, you can create more BPMN 2.0 elements like task types and event definitions.
 
-The demo above shows how to create more BPMN 2.0 elements like lanes, task types, and event definitions.
+For example, [service tasks](/components/modeler/bpmn/service-tasks/service-tasks.md) within Camunda 8 require you to set a task type and implement [job workers](/components/concepts/job-workers.md) to perform a particular task in a process.
 
-## BPMN 2.0 coverage
+Review [the BPMN 2.0 coverage documentation](docs/components/modeler/bpmn/bpmn-coverage.md) for a complete list of BPMN elements supported by our modeling tools.
 
-The Modeler [covers all BPMN 2.0 elements](/components/modeler/bpmn/bpmn-coverage.md) for modeling processes and collaborations.
+Additionally, visit [creating readable process models](/docs/components/best-practices/modeling/creating-readable-process-models.md) for general guidelines on modeling with BPMN.
 
 ## BPMN 2.0 properties for execution
 

versioned_docs/version-8.5/components/best-practices/modeling/creating-readable-process-models.md

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ tags:
 description: "Create visual process models to better understand, discuss, and remember processes so models are easy to read and understand."
 ---
 
-We create visual process models to better understand, discuss, and remember processes. Hence, it is crucial that models are easy to read and understand. The single most important thing is to to use well-chosen labels.
+We create visual process models to better understand, discuss, and remember processes. Hence, it is crucial that models are easy to read and understand. The single most important thing is to use well-chosen labels.
 
 ## Essential practices
 

versioned_docs/version-8.5/components/modeler/bpmn/bpmn.md

@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@ title: BPMN in Modeler
 description: Let's start modeling by creating a BPMN diagram.
 ---
 
+**Business Process Model and Notation (BPMN)** was developed as a graphical notation to represent complex processes. It is maintained by the non-profit [The Object Management Group (OMG)](https://www.omg.org/spec/BPMN/) and employed by numerous organizations globally. The visual nature of BPMN enables greater collaboration between different teams, particularly within Modeler.
+
 :::note
 BPMN diagrams must be created for the process engine they intend to be deployed on. You cannot run a BPMN diagram modeled for Camunda 7 in Camunda 8, or vice versa, at this time.
 :::
@@ -17,15 +19,15 @@ Web and Desktop Modeler both offer a similar core BPMN 2.0 Modeling experience:
 - Add BPMN elements from the palette on the left side of the page by dragging and dropping them onto the diagram canvas.
 - Change the type of element in place by clicking on an element to reveal the context menu. Then, click the wrench icon to change the type of element to a [service task](./service-tasks/service-tasks.md) or [user task](./user-tasks/user-tasks.md), for example.
 
-## Demo
+## Creating BPMN elements
 
-![Demo](./assets/demo.gif)
+Using BPMN in Modeler, you can create more BPMN 2.0 elements like task types and event definitions.
 
-The demo above shows how to create more BPMN 2.0 elements like lanes, task types, and event definitions.
+For example, [service tasks](/components/modeler/bpmn/service-tasks/service-tasks.md) within Camunda 8 require you to set a task type and implement [job workers](/components/concepts/job-workers.md) to perform a particular task in a process.
 
-## BPMN 2.0 coverage
+Review [the BPMN 2.0 coverage documentation](docs/components/modeler/bpmn/bpmn-coverage.md) for a complete list of BPMN elements supported by our modeling tools.
 
-The Modeler [covers all BPMN 2.0 elements](/components/modeler/bpmn/bpmn-coverage.md) for modeling processes and collaborations.
+Additionally, visit [creating readable process models](/docs/components/best-practices/modeling/creating-readable-process-models.md) for general guidelines on modeling with BPMN.
 
 ## BPMN 2.0 properties for execution