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Improved Readability for Profile Page Text #1309

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@mdqst mdqst commented Nov 27, 2024

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Improved Readability for Profile Page Text

I noticed an opportunity to enhance the clarity of the explanatory text at the bottom of the profile page. The current text uses a complex structure with double negatives, which might make it harder to read quickly.

Current Version:

Content displayed on this profile page is rendered directly from the decentralized Basenames protocol, and is not maintained or moderated by, nor under the control of, Coinbase.

Suggested Improvement:

The revised version simplifies the sentence while retaining its original meaning:

Content displayed on this profile page is rendered directly from the decentralized Basenames protocol and is neither maintained nor moderated by Coinbase.

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  1. Enhanced Readability: Simplifying the sentence structure ensures the message is understood at a glance.
  2. Conciseness: The revised text is shorter, removing redundancy like "nor under the control of," without losing any essential information.
  3. Consistency: A cleaner, more direct style aligns better with user-facing communication norms.

This small adjustment improves the overall user experience, especially for those who might not be native English speakers or are skimming the page. Let me know your thoughts!

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