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 = Project Icarus
 
-A new age of power has been developed by the Refined R&D department, allowing heat from concentrated sun rays to boil water into a highy compressed steam.
+A new age of power has been developed by the Refined R&D department, allowing heat from concentrated sun rays to boil water into a highly compressed steam.
 
-As the Ficsit engineers were having to come down to MASSAGE-2(A-B)b and fix the Dyson Sphere the program was terminated.
+The program was terminated because the Ficsit engineers had to come down to MASSAGE-2(A-B)b and fix the Dyson Sphere.
 
 == Introduction
 
 [NOTE]
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-Project Icarus is end game content.
+Project Icarus is end-game content.
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-As the Dyson Sphere Program was one of the first stapple massive buildings in Refined Power it was introduced to the game around Update2 / Update3.
+As the Dyson Sphere Program was one of the first staple massive buildings in Refined Power, it was introduced to the game around Update2 / Update3.
 
-The project didn't have any applity to use some of the new features that game offered in those update e.g. pipes and space elevator parts.
+The project didn't have any ability to use some of the new features that the game offered in those updates, e.g. pipes and space elevator parts.
 
-Due to the number of issue encounted with Dyson Sphere the Refined R&D Team decided that it was not worth updating and started a new Project called Icarus.
+Due to the number of issues encountered with Dyson Sphere, the Refined R&D Team decided it was not worth updating and started a new Project called Icarus.
 
-Icarus has many similar traits to the Dyson Sphere but with a elevated feel.
+Icarus has many similar traits to the Dyson Sphere but with an elevated feel.
 
 == Getting Started
 
-Getting started with Icarus requires you be have unlocked Tier 7/8 in game.
+Getting started with Icarus requires you to have unlocked Tier 7/8 in the game.
 
-To keep the Icarus Ray deflector in space in a working order Repair kits will need to be sent into space.
+Repair kits will need to be sent into space to keep the Icarus Ray deflector in space in working order.
 
-Using a Icarus Rail Gun you can send the different Repair kits to the deflector in space.
+You can send the different Repair kits to the deflector in space using an Icarus Rail Gun.
 
 
 === Icarus Receiver
+It will become active once the Ray deflector has enough repair kits and is green in the Icarus Reciever UI.
 
-Once the Receiver is activated Water is converted to Compressed Steam.
+Once activated, Water can be piped into the building and converted to Compressed Steam.
 Compressed Steam can then be piped to the Super HV Turbines.
 
+The building only works in the daytime and will go into standby mode at night.
+It is advised that power storage is used to handle the nighttime period.
+
 === Icarus Rail Gun
 
-The Rail Gun will charge up with power and once at max stored power it will be released in a surge of energy to shoot the items into space.
+The Rail Gun will charge up with power, and once at max stored power, it will be released in a surge of energy to shoot the items into space.
 
 === Repair Kits
 
-There are four variants of Repair kits they all have different recipes.
+There are four variants of Repair kits, and they all have different recipes.
 
 * Icarus Basic Repair Kit
 * Icarus Pioneer Repair Kit