Implemented feedback from Matt's review

advocacy_docs/edb-postgres-ai/migration-etl/index.mdx

@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The available migration tools are suitable for different migration scenarios. Th
 
 EDB DMS offers a secure and fault-tolerant way to migrate database data to the EDB Postgres AI platform using change data capture and event streaming technologies. This allows the migration to stream any changes in the source database to the EDB Cloud Service database until you decide to cut over.
 
-At the end of an EDB DMS migration, you will host your database entirely within the EDB Postgres AI Cloud Service ecosystem.
+At the end of a data migration with EDB DMS, the data in your source database will have been copied to a Postgres database managed with EDB Postgres AI Cloud Service.
 
 - **Purpose:** Migration of database data
 
@@ -45,17 +45,15 @@ EDB Postgres® AI Migration Portal offers an [AI copilot](/migration_portal/late
 
 ## EDB Postgres AI Replication Server
 
-[EDB Postgres Replication Server](/eprs/latest/) is an asynchronous replication tool that helps you keep your Postgres database up-to-date with changes from other databases.
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-You can use Replication Server to implement replication systems based on either of two different replication models: single-master (primary-to-secondary) replication or multi-master replication.
+[EDB Postgres Replication Server](/eprs/latest/) is a tool that replicates data between Postgres databases, or from non-Postgres databases to Postgres databases, for asynchronous data replication as part of a migration.
 
 - **Purpose:** Ongoing data synchronization
 
 - **Applicable migration scenarios:** A number of combinations from and to Oracle, SQL Server, PostgreSQL, EDB Postgres Advanced Server. See [Introduction](/eprs/latest/01_introduction/) for an overview of possible replication scenarios.
 
 ## EDB Postgres AI LiveCompare 
 
-[LiveCompare](/livecompare/latest/) is a utility that you can use to compare databases and verify that they're identical. 
+[LiveCompare](/livecompare/latest/) is a utility that you can use to compare the data in two databases to verify that they're identical.
 
 You can use it to compare two or several databases, to generate a comparison report with differences, and to generate a DML script thay you can run to fix any inconsistencies.