Minor tweaks for better brand identity (#141)

blog/2024-12-18.md

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 ## Data Standard 5.2
 
-The most important feature in this release is addition of the **Assessment Registration** domain. This set of entities supports education organizations' needs to register students for assessments and share registration data with their assessment vendors. This capability has long been requested by our Ed-Fi community, and the design was reviewed by the Data Standard Workgroup.
+The most important feature in this release is addition of the **Assessment Registration** domain. This set of entities supports education organizations' needs to register students for assessments and share registration data with their assessment vendors. This capability has long been requested by the community, and the design was reviewed by the Data Standard Workgroup.
 
 In the **Alternative and Supplemental Services** domain we have added a new association between Section 504 eligibility and programs, for tracking compliance with  the Free Appropriate Public Education (FAPE) federal policy.
 
 Recognizing the increasing prevalence of dual credit enrollment, `DualCredit` has been added to the `StudentSectionAssociation`.
 
-See  [What's new in v5.2](/reference/data-exchange/data-standard/whats-new/whats-new-v52) for more detailed information on these and other changes. Also keep eye on this blog in January, as we prepare a detailed list of changes from the perspective of the Ed-Fi Resources API (in other words, a comprehensive list of new or modified API endpoints).
+See  [What's new in v5.2](/reference/data-exchange/data-standard/whats-new/whats-new-v52) for more detailed information on these and other changes. Also keep eye on this blog in January, as we are preparing a detailed list of new or modified API endpoints.
 
 ## ODS/API 7.3
 
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 ## What's Next
 
-Its the end of the year and we're all looking forward to a short pause. There is a lot of work to come in 2025! And you can keep an eye on it via the new [Roadmap Boards](https://github.com/orgs/Ed-Fi-Alliance-OSS/projects/1) in GitHub. Also see [Ed-Fi Technology Roadmap](/reference/roadmap/) for tips on how to use this board.
+Its the end of the year and we're all looking forward to a short pause. There is a lot of work to come in 2025! And you can keep an eye on it via the new [Roadmap Boards](https://github.com/orgs/Ed-Fi-Alliance-OSS/projects/1) in GitHub. Also see the [technology roadmap](/reference/roadmap/) for tips on how to use this board.