Grammar Sweep for Fridges/Freezers (#74251)

* Item run

* Appliance run

* Update terrain

* Freeze, not cool

* Final (hopefully) adjustments

* Misspelt "Separators"

data/json/furniture_and_terrain/appliances_refrigeration.json

@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@
     "name": { "str": "freezer" },
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "categories": [ "cargo" ],
-    "description": "A common upright freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A common upright freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "size": "122 L",
     "//": "Rated 30 kwh on average, but since you use it, and it's upright, 1.5x as much",
     "epower": "-45 W",
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
     "id": "ap_minifreezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "minifreezer" },
-    "description": "Small freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A small freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "categories": [ "cargo" ],
     "epower": "-46 W",
     "//": "31 kwh, but since you open and use it, and because it's upright, 1.5x as much",
@@ -212,7 +212,7 @@
     "id": "ap_chest_minifreezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "chest minifreezer" },
-    "description": "Small chest freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A small chest freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "looks_like": "minifridge",
     "epower": "-26 W",
     "//": "22 kwh, but since you open it and use it, 1.2 as much",
@@ -228,7 +228,7 @@
     "id": "ap_big_portable_freezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "food truck freezer" },
-    "description": "Heavy, portable freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A heavy, portable freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "looks_like": "fridge",
     "epower": "-211 W",
     "//": "141 kwh, but since you open it and use it, and because it's upright, 1.5 as much",
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@
     "id": "ap_chest_freezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "chest freezer" },
-    "description": "Big chest freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A big chest freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.  Don't fall in!",
     "looks_like": "fridge",
     "epower": "-36 W",
     "//": "30 kwh, but since you open it and use it, 1.2 as much",
@@ -258,7 +258,7 @@
     "id": "ap_heavy_duty_freezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "heavy-duty freezer" },
-    "description": "Heavy-duty freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A heavy-duty freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "looks_like": "fridge",
     "epower": "-576 W",
     "//": "384 kwh, but since you open it and use it, and because it's upright, 1.5 as much",
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@
     "id": "ap_glass_freezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "glass door freezer" },
-    "description": "Glass door freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A glass door freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "looks_like": "fridge",
     "epower": "-456 W",
     "//": "304 kwh, but since you open it and use it, and because it's upright, 1.5 as much",
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@
     "id": "ap_display_freezer",
     "copy-from": "ap_apartment_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "display freezer" },
-    "description": "Display freezer.  When turned on, it will cool the food inside, extending the time until the food spoils.",
+    "description": "A display freezer.  When turned on, it will freeze the food inside, preventing any further expiration.",
     "looks_like": "fridge",
     "epower": "-27 W",
     "//": "23 kwh, but since you open it and use it, 1.2 as much",

data/json/furniture_and_terrain/furniture_refrigeration.json

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
     "color": "light_cyan",
-    "description": "Small fridge, often used in places where full-size fridge would be out of place, or to store cold drinks.  Activate to connect it to the power grid.",
+    "description": "A small fridge, often used in places where full-size fridge would be too big or too much a hassle to transport, or when you only need a small amount of items chilled.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
     "required_str": 10,
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
     "color": "light_cyan",
-    "description": "A modern refrigerator with a thick sheet of glass in the door, used in stores to show the goods and cool them at once.  Activate to connect it to the power grid.",
+    "description": "A modern refrigerator with a thick sheet of glass for a door, used in stores to show off the goods while keeping them cool.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
     "required_str": 10,
@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
     "color": "light_cyan",
-    "description": "A modern refrigerator with two glass doors, to fit twice as more goods for consumers.  Activate to connect it to the power grid.",
+    "description": "A modern refrigerator with two glass doors, to fit twice as much goods for consumers.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
     "required_str": 10,
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
     "color": "light_cyan",
-    "description": "A heavy, bulky refrigerator, used at professional kitchens.  Activate to connect it to the power grid.",
+    "description": "A heavy, bulky refrigerator, used in professional kitchens.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
     "required_str": 10,
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
     "color": "light_cyan",
-    "description": "Big glass chamber, designed to display different food in a multiple rows, while cooling it at the same time.  Looks gorgeous, but has nothing good to show to you.  Activate to connect it to the power grid.",
+    "description": "A big glass chamber, designed to display different food in multiple rows, while cooling it at the same time.  Looks gorgeous, but has nothing good to show to you.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
     "required_str": 10,
@@ -141,7 +141,7 @@
     "name": "minifreezer",
     "looks_like": "minifreezer",
     "symbol": "{",
-    "description": "Small upright freezer, used to store perishables somewhere in the pantry.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A small upright freezer, used to store a small amount of perishables long term.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "color": "blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 60,
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@
     "name": "chest minifreezer",
     "looks_like": "minifreezer",
     "symbol": "{",
-    "description": "Small chest freezer, used to store perishables somewhere in the pantry.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A small chest freezer, used to store a small amount of perishables for a long time, if you're willing to dig them out each time that is.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "color": "blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 60,
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@
     "name": "chest freezer",
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
-    "description": "A chest freezer.  Big and power efficient, this should be a dream for every cataclysm survivor.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A chest freezer.  Big and power efficient, this is the dream for every cataclysm survivor.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "color": "blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 70,
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@
     "name": "heavy-duty freezer",
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
-    "description": "Heavy-duty upright freezer, one that is used on professional kitchen.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A heavy-duty upright freezer, one that is used in a professional kitchen.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "color": "blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@
     "name": "glass door freezer",
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
-    "description": "Commercial freezer, used to show ice creams, frozen veggies and pizza in grocery store, while conveniently preserving them.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A commercial upright freezer, used to show ice creams, frozen veggies, pizza, or anything else a consumer may want frozen and preserved.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "color": "blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,
@@ -256,7 +256,7 @@
     "name": "display chest freezer",
     "looks_like": "f_fridge",
     "symbol": "{",
-    "description": "Commercial freezer, used to show ice creams, frozen veggies and pizza in grocery store, while conveniently preserving them.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A commercial chest freezer, used to show off ice creams, frozen veggies, pizza, or anything else a consumer may want frozen and preserved.  Conveniently tall enough for any curious child to gaze in at the sweets.  Deconstruct it if you want to connect it to the grid.",
     "color": "blue",
     "move_cost_mod": -1,
     "coverage": 90,

data/json/items/appliances/appliances_refrigeration.json

@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "id": "minifridge",
     "name": { "str": "minifridge" },
-    "description": "A disconnected minifridge.  You saw similar one in some luxury limousines.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A disconnected minifridge, similar to ones in some luxury limousines.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "danby.com/products/compact-refrigerators/dar033a6bsldb/",
     "//1": "44.91 * 51.89 * 84.00",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "minifridge" },
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "id": "big_portable_fridge",
     "name": { "str": "food truck fridge" },
-    "description": "Heavy and bulky fridge with little wheels for easier transportation.  Has a bunch of holders, which allow to to install it in a vehicle and be relatively sure it won't smash fragile items inside.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A heavy and bulky fridge with little wheels for easier transportation.  Has a bunch of sections and separators, which allow it to be installed in a vehicle with relative assurance that any items inside will stay put.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "TrueMFG T-19-HC, scaled down to fit the size of vehicle parts (assumed to be 500L)",
     "//2": "original values: 686 * 623 * 1912 mm, 112 kg, gross capacity 417 L, 495 kwh/annual",
     "//3": "scaled values: 578 * 525 * 1615 mm, 67 kg, gross capacity 250 L, 296 kwh/annual",
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
     "symbol": "F",
     "color": "light_blue",
     "name": { "str": "single glass door fridge" },
-    "description": "A disconnected commercial refrigerator with a transparent glass door, designed to store cold drinks and similar stuff in a grocery store.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A disconnected commercial refrigerator with a transparent glass door, designed to show off any cold drinks and similar goods in a grocery store while still keeping them cool.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "Tefcold CEV425CP, 1980 x 595 x 640 mm, net capacity 347 L, 821 kwh/annum, 94 kwh",
     "//2": "door should be approx 11 kilo of glass",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "glass_fridge" },
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@
     "symbol": "F",
     "color": "light_blue",
     "name": { "str": "double glass door fridge" },
-    "description": "A disconnected commercial refrigerator with two transparent glass doors, designed to store cold drinks and similar stuff in a grocery store.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A disconnected commercial refrigerator with two transparent glass doors, designed to show off any cold drinks and similar goods in a grocery store while still keeping them cool.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "True GDM-35-HC-TSL01, 1998 x 1004 x 759 mm (because of technical limitations, only 1000L of volume, not 1522), net capacity 991 L, 2103 kwh/annum, 240 kwh",
     "//2": "doors should be approx 19 kilo of glass",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "glass_fridge_double" },
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@
     "symbol": "F",
     "color": "light_blue",
     "name": { "str": "heavy-duty fridge" },
-    "description": "A disconnected commercial refrigerator, one that is used in professional kitchen.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A disconnected commercial refrigerator, used in many professional kitchens.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "Polar UA030, 2150 x 700 x 810 mm (because of technical limitations, only 1000 L of volume, not 1219), net capacity 700 L, 351 kwh/annum, 40 kwh",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "heavy_duty_fridge" },
     "longest_side": "2150 mm",
@@ -121,7 +121,7 @@
     "symbol": "F",
     "color": "light_blue",
     "name": { "str": "display fridge" },
-    "description": "Big glass chamber, designed to display different food in a multiple rows, while cooling it at the same time.  While you might not need to actually display any of your food, it cool the food as good as any another fridge.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A big glass chamber, designed to display different food in a multiple rows, while cooling it at the same time.  While you might not need to actually display any of your food, it cools the food as good as any another fridge.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//2": "Interlevin CHOPIN 1000 FV-VP, 1300 x 1050 x 800 mm (because of technical limitations, only 1000 L of volume, not 1092), net capacity 600 L (dimensions are calculated manually, 775 * 775 * 1000 mm), 1205 kwh/annum, 137 kwh",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "display_fridge" },
     "longest_side": "928 mm",
@@ -140,7 +140,7 @@
     "symbol": "F",
     "color": "light_blue",
     "name": { "str": "household freezer" },
-    "description": "A disconnected household freezer.  Great choise if you need to freeze some discount meat.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A disconnected household freezer.  Great choice if you need to freeze some discount meat.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "danby.com/products/freezers/dufm043a2wdd/",
     "//2": "60.81 * 63.20 * 92.86 cm, 260 kwh/annual",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "apartment_freezer" },
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "id": "chest_minifreezer",
     "name": { "str": "chest minifreezer" },
-    "description": "A compact version of a chest freezer, designed as a mobile solution for freezing food.  Perfect choise to put in your closet and forget for a year, but it's pretty tricky to pull anything digged with frozen perishables.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A compact version of a chest freezer, designed as a mobile solution for freezing food, but it's pretty tricky to pull anything out from the bottom.  Perfect choice to put in your closet and forget for a year.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "danby.com/products/freezers/dcf035a6wm/",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "chest_minifreezer" },
     "weight": "22940 g",
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "id": "big_portable_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "food truck freezer" },
-    "description": "Heavy and bulky freezer with little wheels for easier transportation.  Has a bunch of holders, which allow to to install it in a vehicle and be relatively sure it won't smash fragile items inside.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A heavy and bulky freezer with little wheels for easier transportation.  Has a bunch of sections and separators, which allow it to be installed in a vehicle with relative assurance that any items inside will stay put.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "TrueMFG T-19F-HC, scaled down to fit the size of vehicle parts (assumed to be 500L)",
     "//2": "original values: 686 * 623 * 1912 mm, 120 kg, gross capacity 417 L, 2066 kwh/annual",
     "//3": "scaled values: 578 * 525 * 1615 mm, 72 kg, gross capacity 250 L, 1238 kwh/annual",
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "id": "chest_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "chest freezer" },
-    "description": "Hefty chest freezer, designed to store plenty of perishables for a minuscule amount of power.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A hefty chest freezer, designed to store plenty of perishables for a minuscule amount of power.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "Prodis Arctic AR350SS, 850 x 1030 x 750 mm, gross capacity 350L, 0.724 kwh/day, 30kwh",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "chest_freezer" },
     "weight": "50 kg",
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
     "type": "GENERIC",
     "id": "heavy_duty_freezer",
     "name": { "str": "heavy-duty freezer" },
-    "description": "Heavy-duty upright freezer.  Big as closet, heavy as tank, probably can fit enough meat to feed an little colony for a week, but consumes power like a truck.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
+    "description": "A heavy-duty upright freezer.  Big as a closet, heavy as a tank, can probably fit enough meat to feed a little colony for a week, but consumes power like no other.  Activate to deploy and connect to your electric grid.",
     "//": "Infrico AGN602BT, 850 x 1030 x 750 mm (because of technical limitations, 1000L instead of 1421L ), gross capacity 745 L, 3365 kwh/annum, 384 kwh",
     "use_action": { "type": "deploy_appliance", "base": "heavy_duty_freezer" },
     "weight": "172 kg",