diff --git a/draft-pauly-httpbis-geoip-hint.md b/draft-pauly-httpbis-geoip-hint.md index 315e079..d6e566e 100644 --- a/draft-pauly-httpbis-geoip-hint.md +++ b/draft-pauly-httpbis-geoip-hint.md @@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ factor when choosing a response: ~~~ # Client Behavior - + The client MUST determine geolocation using a cooperating server that looks up the client's IP address in a geo-IP database. The client MUST NOT use GPS. The client hint value MUST NOT be more precise @@ -164,8 +164,8 @@ including delivering region-specific news, weather forecasts, and relevant advertisements. The server MUST be able to handle situations where geolocation is -not provided in a request. Since not all web clients will send a -Geolocation Client Hint, the server MAY defer to alternative methods +not provided in a request. Since not all web clients will send a +Geolocation Client Hint, the server MAY defer to alternative methods such as IP-based geolocation feeds to provide said value. # Security Considerations {#sec-considerations} @@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ NOT reveal information about the user's location that would otherwise be hidden. To prevent disclosing private information, this value cannot be -based on other sources of geolocation data, such as GPS or physical +based on other sources of geolocation data, such as GPS or physical latitude and longitude coordinates. Providing overly precise location information could expose sensitive user information especially when combined with other identifiable signals. Furthermore, when a client