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%% journalrebuttal.tex
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%% A LaTeX class to create rebuttal documents for journal
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\documentclass[12pt]{journalrebuttal}
\title{Packet Optical Transport Network Slicing with Hard and Soft Isolation}
\author{S.~Barguil, V.~López, L.M.~Contreras, O. González de Dios, A.~Alcalá, C.~Manso, P.~Alemany, R.~Casellas, R.~Martínez, D.~González-Pérez, X. Liu, J.M.~Pulido, J.P. Fernández-Palacios, R.~Muñoz, R.~Vilalta}
\journal{Applied Sciences}
\manuscriptid{applsci-1270422}
\usepackage{verbatim}
\usepackage{changes}
%% You can define Note commands using the \ColorNote command
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\newcommand{\PHNote}[1]{\ColorNote{red}{PH}{#1}}
\begin{document}
%\pagenumbering{arabic}
\maketitle
\vspace{0.5cm}
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\section*{Overview}
We would like to thank the reviewers for the fruitful feedback as well as their time to carry out the review. We have incorporated most of their suggestions, which have resulted in a significant improve of the paper.
\nextreviewer
\begin{revcomment}
This work focuses on studying the uses and validates of iFusion architecture defined by Telefonica. Which works on the validation of an end-to-end creation, modification and deletion of transport network slices with several degrees of isolation.
The presentation, exhibition and the results are well commented on in the text and the bibliography describes well the background on the subject matter and the contributions of the research group.
However, there are some requirements before publishing:
\end{revcomment}
\begin{revcomment}
English and grammatical errors should be rectified during the revision of the paper.
\end{revcomment}
\begin{response}
Thank you for the comment. The authors have corrected typos and proofread the document to improve English usage and readability.
\end{response}
\begin{revcomment}
The authors should also add the definition of abbreviations in the text, that some abbreviations are not defined. Eg.: BSS/OSS\_line3, YANG\_line11, L3VPNs\_line34, VPN\_line95, ODus-line113, etc.
\end{revcomment}
\begin{response}
The authors enhanced the \Cref{tab:abbreviations} of the abbreviation to include the whole set of abbreviations and facilitate the paper understanding.
\begin{table}[htb!]
\caption{List of abbreviations used across the document}
\label{tab:abbreviations}
\begin{center}
\begin{tabular}{|l|l|}
\hline
Abbreviation & \multicolumn{1}{c|}{Definition} \\ \hline
3GPP & 3rd Generation Partnership Project \\ \hline
API & Application programming interface \\ \hline
\added{BSS} & \added{Business Support System} \\ \hline
\added{BGP} & \added{Border Gateway Protocol} \\ \hline
\added{CE} & \added{Customer Edge} \\ \hline
IETF & Internet Engineering Task Force \\ \hline
eMBB & Enhanced Mobile Broadband \\ \hline
L2SM & L2VPN Service Model \\ \hline
L2NM & L2VPN Network Model \\ \hline
L3SM & L3VPN Service Model \\ \hline
L3NM & L3VPN Network Model \\ \hline
\added{L3VPN} & \added{Layer Three Virtual Private Network}\\ \hline
MC & Mobile Core \\ \hline
mMTC & Massive Machine Type Communication \\ \hline
MPLS & Multiprotocol Label Switching \\ \hline
NASS & Network As A Service \\ \hline
NGMN & Next Generation Mobile Networks \\ \hline
NSI & Network Slice Instance \\ \hline
\added{ODU} & \added{Optical Distribution Unit} \\ \hline
ONF & Open Networking Foundation \\ \hline
OSS & Operation Support Systems \\ \hline
\added{PE} & \added{Provider Edge} \\ \hline
QoS & Quality of service \\ \hline
RAN & Radio Access Network \\ \hline
SDN & Software Defined Network \\ \hline
SI & Service Instance \\ \hline
URLLC & Ultra Reliable Low Latency Communications \\ \hline
VSI & Virtual switching Interfaces \\ \hline
\added{VPN} & \added{Virtual Private Network} \\ \hline
VRF & Virtual Routing and Forwarding \\ \hline
YANG & Yet Another Next Generation \\ \hline
\end{tabular}
\end{center}
\end{table}
Furthermore, in the text some abbreviations was expanded to enhance the readability:
\added{Thus, VRFs, VSIs or \added{Optical Data units} (ODus) cannot be managed by their corresponding tenants directly because they are part of the same administrative domain represented by the physical device, and they need to be operated by the network administrator.}
\end{response}
\begin{revcomment}
Line 66 , "..ecosystem [9–11]., One.." Delete the extra comma "
\end{revcomment}
\begin{response}
The authors replaced some minor nits found in the paper.
\end{response}
\begin{revcomment}
Lines 73-78, Very long sentence and confused!!
\end{revcomment}
\begin{response}
The authors has rephrased the sentence to enhance the readability:
\added{5G expects to support a new generation of customer-tailored applications with diverse requirements regarding capacity, latency, level of mobility, number of users, and user density. Hence, 5G sets the stage for innovation and transformation in customer services and vertical industries, such as the ones described in the Table 2 [12].}
\end{response}
\end{document}