diff --git a/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md b/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md index ba176ab1..e284c451 100644 --- a/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md +++ b/draft-ietf-privacypass-architecture.md @@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ additional bits provides an exponential increase in tracking granularity similarly to introducing more Issuers (though with more potential targeting). For this reason, deployments should take the amount of metadata used by an Issuer -in creating redemption tokens must into account -- together with the bits +in creating redemption tokens into account -- together with the bits of information that Issuers may learn about Clients otherwise. Since this metadata may be useful for practical deployments of Privacy Pass, Issuers must balance this against the reduction in Client privacy.