diff --git a/about/index.html b/about/index.html
index a6788b14..4841cafd 100644
--- a/about/index.html
+++ b/about/index.html
@@ -302,12 +302,13 @@ <h1 class="heading--main">About</h1>
 
     
     <article class="prose">
-        <p>Hi, I am Helen Chong (they/she) from Malaysia. I am a front-end web developer with 8 years of working experience as a graphic designer.</p>
-<p>I love to build and create things for problem-solving and self-expression. I intend to transfer my graphic design experience into web design and web development expertise, using code and build sites and apps to solve problems. I have a particular interest on responsive, accessible, inclusive and scalable design to create the best user experience.</p>
+        <p>Greetings! I am Helen Chong (they/she), an aspiring web developer from Malaysia. Previously, I had worked 8 years as a graphic designer. Now I have decided to transfer my creativity and problem-solving skills into building the web, with a focus on accessible design, progressive enhancement and web performance to improve user experience.</p>
+<p>I have been interested in computers and the internet, as well as learning how to use them since I was a child. Later during my teenage years, I learned about the existence of blogs, and began blogging, which led me to learn HTML and CSS to customise blog themes and widgets. I was already fascinated by web design, however I was unaware if web design could be a viable career path, so I used my interest in design to pursue an education and later career in graphic design.</p>
+<p>In 2022, I began to relearn HTML and CSS after realising the resurgence of creating personal websites. This time, I began to properly learn JavaScript, and my interest in web design and developed grew enough for me to consider pursuing web development. As a result, I started taking online coding courses, started with freeCodeCamp and Scrimba.</p>
 <p>In addition to coding and programming, I enjoy gaming, reading, drawing and crocheting.</p>
 <p>You can <a href="https://helenchong.dev/resume">check out my resume</a>.</p>
 <div class="heading-wrapper h2">
-<h2 id="my-certificates">My Certificates:</h2>
+<h2 id="my-certificates">My Certificates</h2>
 <a class="heading-anchor" href="#my-certificates" aria-labelledby="my-certificates"><span hidden>#</span></a></div>
 <ul>
 <li>freeCodeCamp's <a href="https://www.freecodecamp.org/certification/helenclx/responsive-web-design">Responsive Web Design Certification</a></li>
diff --git a/index.html b/index.html
index f4eafd60..03c63e3e 100644
--- a/index.html
+++ b/index.html
@@ -293,8 +293,8 @@ <h2 class="visually-hidden">Introduction</h2>
     </div>
     <div class="profile__card">
         <p class="profile__text">Hi! I am <span class="profile__text--highlight">Helen</span>, a graphic designer turned web developer from Malaysia.</p>
-        <p class="profile__text">As a <span class="profile__text--highlight">Front-End Developer</span>, I love building sites and apps to help people, solve problems and express myself.</p>
-        <p class="profile__text">I focus on responsive design, accessibility and scalability to create inclusive and dynamic user experiences.</p>
+        <p class="profile__text">As a <span class="profile__text--highlight">Front-End Developer</span>, I love building sites and apps to solve problems and express myself.</p>
+        <p class="profile__text">I focus on accessible design, progressive enhancement and web performance to create an inclusive user experience.</p>
         <p class="profile__text">I am always open to new opportunities and projects, so do not hesitate to <a class="profile__link" href="/contact">get in touch</a>. You can also <a href="https://helenchong.dev/resume">check out my resume</a>.<p>
     </div>
 </section>