diff --git a/_config.yml b/_config.yml
index 6c6bbd4..efc859e 100644
--- a/_config.yml
+++ b/_config.yml
@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@
 title: Gideon Moore 
 email: gsmoore@stanford.edu
 description: >- # this means to ignore newlines until "baseurl:"
-  Predoctoral Research Fellow at SIEPR working with Heidi Williams. Interested in the Economics of Education, Market Design, and Innovation
+  Economics PhD Student at Stanford University
 baseurl: "" # the subpath of your site, e.g. /blog
 url: "https://www.gideonmoore.com" # the base hostname & protocol for your site, e.g. http://example.com
 
diff --git a/education.markdown b/education.markdown
index d775951..a2a4dba 100644
--- a/education.markdown
+++ b/education.markdown
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@ title: Education
 
 ### **Graduate Student**
 
-PhD student incoming fall of 2022
+PhD student, started fall 2022.
 
 ### **Predoctoral Research Fellow**
 
diff --git a/experience.markdown b/experience.markdown
index 072f0db..1c66003 100644
--- a/experience.markdown
+++ b/experience.markdown
@@ -3,15 +3,15 @@ title: Experience
 ---
 
 ### Stanford Institute for Economic Policy Research
-#### Predoctoral Research Fellow: _2019--Present_
+#### Predoctoral Research Fellow: _2019--2022_
 
 <img src="images/SIEPR_Logo.gif" width="30%" align="left" style="padding-right: 30px;">
 
-* Working with Professor [Heidi Williams](https://heidi-williams.humsci.stanford.edu/) on projects related to the economics of innovation placing special focus on innovation in health care and drug development
+* Worked with Professor [Heidi Williams](https://heidi-williams.humsci.stanford.edu/) on projects related to the economics of innovation placing special focus on innovation in health care and drug development
 
-* Process, organize, and analyze large data sets such as the United States Patent and Trademark Office Bulk Data Repository and Clarivate’s Web of Science bulk data
+* Processed, organized, and analyzed large data sets such as the United States Patent and Trademark Office Bulk Data Repository and Clarivate’s Web of Science bulk data
 
-* Conduct original research as part of ongoing graduate coursework in the Stanford Economics department
+* Conducted original research as part of graduate coursework in the Stanford Economics department
 
 &nbsp;
 
diff --git a/index.markdown b/index.markdown
index 94f8b13..0889c08 100644
--- a/index.markdown
+++ b/index.markdown
@@ -4,6 +4,6 @@ layout: home
 
 <img src="images/SIEPR_Headshot.jpg" width="40%" align="left" style="padding-right: 30px;">
 
-I'm currently a PhD student in the Stanford Economics department interested in education, market design, and innovation (entered fall 2022). 
+I am currently a PhD student in the Stanford economics department interested in education, market design, and innovation. 
 
-Previously I worked as a Predoctoral Research Fellow with Heidi Williams at the Stanford Institute for Economic Policy Research (SIEPR) focusing on the economics of innovation. I completed my A. B. at Bowdoin College in 2019, studying Economics and Mathematics with a minor in Computer Science.
+Prior to joining the Stanford PhD program, I worked as a Predoctoral Research Fellow at the Stanford Institute for Economic Policy Research (SIEPR) with Heidi Williams. I completed my A. B. at Bowdoin College in 2019, studying Economics and Mathematics with a minor in Computer Science.