From 7e364d6530cc3b36f63ccae13debd771350a429b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Resynth <resynth1943@tutanota.com>
Date: Wed, 23 Dec 2020 21:02:44 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Update clumsily-worded sentence

I really don't like how this is worded. What do you think of my edit?
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 source/index.html.erb | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/source/index.html.erb b/source/index.html.erb
index 036b862..19c0b7f 100644
--- a/source/index.html.erb
+++ b/source/index.html.erb
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
       <main>
         <h2>Social blogging</h2>
         <p>
-          When we write, it is, most of the time, to share something with other people.
+          When you write with Plume, you can easily share your work with others.
           Plume has many features that allow the exchange between writers and readers to be bi-directional from the get-go.
         </p>
       </main>