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         <h2>Social blogging</h2>
         <p>
-          When we write, it is, most of the time, to share something with other people.
+          When you write with Plume, you can easily share your work with others.
           Plume has many features that allow the exchange between writers and readers to be bi-directional from the get-go.
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